From: Michael Kaply <consulting@kaply.com>
Date: Wed, 11 Apr 2018 21:13:19 +0000 (-0500)
Subject: Better telemetry disclaimer from data team
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X-Git-Url: https://git.p6c8.net/policy-templates.git/commitdiff_plain/b64356893453f81103fd1ca949fb6e9de30a8c80?ds=sidebyside;hp=--cc

Better telemetry disclaimer from data team
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b64356893453f81103fd1ca949fb6e9de30a8c80
diff --git a/README.md b/README.md
index 2277853..77fdbde 100644
--- a/README.md
+++ b/README.md
@@ -241,7 +241,9 @@ This policy prevents system add-ons from being updated or installed.
 }
 ```
 ### DisableTelemetry
-This policy prevents the upload of telemetry data. Mozilla strongly recommends that you do NOT disable telemetry if you do not have a business need to do so.
+This policy prevents the upload of telemetry data.
+
+Mozilla recommends that you do not disable telemetry. Information collected through telemetry helps us build a better product for businesses like yours.
 ```
 {
   "policies": {
@@ -487,4 +489,4 @@ This policy allows you to add new search engines, as well as set the default and
     }
   }
 }
-```
\ No newline at end of file
+```
diff --git a/windows/en-US/firefox.adml b/windows/en-US/firefox.adml
index ea66f2e..d046e3f 100644
--- a/windows/en-US/firefox.adml
+++ b/windows/en-US/firefox.adml
@@ -92,7 +92,7 @@ If this policy is disabled or not configured, system add-ons are installed and u
 
 If this policy is disabled or not configured, telemetry is collected and uploaded.
 
-Mozilla strongly recommends that you do NOT disable telemetry if you do not have a business need to do so.</string>
+Mozilla recommends that you do not disable telemetry. Information collected through telemetry helps us build a better product for businesses like yours.</string>
       <string id="DisplayBookmarksToolbar">Display Bookmarks Toolbar</string>
       <string id="DisplayBookmarksToolbar_Explain">Causes the bookmarks toolbar to be displayed by default.</string>
       <string id="DisplayMenuBar">Display Menu Bar</string>