Merge pull request #63 from mozilla/telemetry_string

Better telemetry disclaimer from data team

diff --git a/README.md b/README.md
index 2277853e574a19074242a69c8e2848b403f29ba4..77fdbdea0a0dcee13d64dfca19ad35066801bb29 100644 (file)
--- a/README.md
+++ b/README.md
@@ -241,7 +241,9 @@ This policy prevents system add-ons from being updated or installed.
 }
 ```
 ### DisableTelemetry
-This policy prevents the upload of telemetry data. Mozilla strongly recommends that you do NOT disable telemetry if you do not have a business need to do so.
+This policy prevents the upload of telemetry data.
+
+Mozilla recommends that you do not disable telemetry. Information collected through telemetry helps us build a better product for businesses like yours.
 ```
 {
   "policies": {
@@ -487,4 +489,4 @@ This policy allows you to add new search engines, as well as set the default and
     }
   }
 }
-```
\ No newline at end of file
+```

diff --git a/windows/en-US/firefox.adml b/windows/en-US/firefox.adml
index ea66f2ec358308f3ed6bfc3d479501b97dc160b6..d046e3fd7a85467e9ae20cbbdaa539f352001982 100644 (file)
--- a/windows/en-US/firefox.adml
+++ b/windows/en-US/firefox.adml
@@ -92,7 +92,7 @@ If this policy is disabled or not configured, system add-ons are installed and u
 
 If this policy is disabled or not configured, telemetry is collected and uploaded.
 
-Mozilla strongly recommends that you do NOT disable telemetry if you do not have a business need to do so.</string>
+Mozilla recommends that you do not disable telemetry. Information collected through telemetry helps us build a better product for businesses like yours.</string>
       <string id="DisplayBookmarksToolbar">Display Bookmarks Toolbar</string>
       <string id="DisplayBookmarksToolbar_Explain">Causes the bookmarks toolbar to be displayed by default.</string>
       <string id="DisplayMenuBar">Display Menu Bar</string>